Post by Mysteryfaith on Dec 18, 2009 14:50:11 GMT -5
Reviews
This form is for reviewing fanfiction stories of any kind.
Please be reasonable with your reviewing - we can all change, and nobody's perfect.
Only post your review as a reply to the thread you're reviewing.
Try to base your review on "two stars and a wish." Give two good points and a point where they could improve. Remember to encourage the writer!
You can review all work, but please consider the state of the story you're reviewing: uncompleted ones can be improved upon!
Only give a rating from 1-10, and add a comment saying why you gave them that rating (and how they could improve if they got less than a 10.)
Always use the form![b]Plot:[/b] /10
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[b]Readability:[/b] /10
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[b]Characters:[/b] /10
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[b]Description:[/b] /10
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[b]Originality:[/b] /10
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[b]Overall:[/b] %
[overall comment here]
Example:
Plot: 8/10
I liked your plot, but it was a little unclear at times - maybe a sign or message would make things a little more interesting for the reader?
Readability: 9/10
A few spelling errors and grammar mistakes, but overall it was very nice and readable. It was very clear, but at one point you said his fur was dark brown tabby when before you said he was a silver [in Chapter 4.]
Characters: 7/10
I liked your characters, but they were sort of your typical heroes-and-villains. To make things more interesting, maybe you could've had a cat who didn't know which side to be on?
Description: 10/10
Very descriptive, and no errors at all. I especially loved the beginning, when you described the scene in the mist - beautiful!
Originality: 8/10
It was quite original, but you could improve your next work by just including some mystery, or some new character concepts.
Overall: 84% [Add it all up and x2]
Your story was great and quite a fun read, but picking up on the points I've suggested could make your next story even better! ;3